District 17 sounds truly awful. I like the ironic tone. There are a couple of places where punctuation goes awry, read the piece aloud and you will hear it. Also, tenses get switched for no obvious reason. For example the narrator was doing something and in the next sentence he is doing it. Have a look.
District 17 sounds truly awful. I like the ironic tone. There are a couple of places where punctuation goes awry, read the piece aloud and you will hear it. Also, tenses get switched for no obvious reason. For example the narrator was doing something and in the next sentence he is doing it. Have a look.